The “Look” Challenge ~ A Sample from the 2nd Forever Girl book! #books #amreading
Wendy Russo posted a “look” challenge on her blog, and tagged the people she thinks is awesome. Like me. The idea is that you open your manuscript, search for the first use of the word “look” and post the paragraphs surrounding it. I’m posting mine, then I’ll tag more authors at the end. I’ve selected a sample of my work in progress for this one. Enjoy the teaser!
Nobody wants to talk about what Pa did to me.
Mama and I sway on the porch swing, drinking the sun-brewed iced tea she has sweetened with cane sugar and chilled with ice from the freezer tray. We talk about the weather. Well, Mama is talking about the weather. If it was up to me, there would be no talking.
During our talks, her gaze flits around, never settling on anything for too long. Especially not my stomach and definitely not my eyes. She can’t look at me without getting that pained, watery gaze. I think she must not like shutting her eyes, either, because there are dark circles under them.
Maybe she doesn’t sleep anymore.
“Nice day today,” she says.
The words mean to fill the air between us.
I stare at the muted days and pale skies, the dirt roads and faded grass. Forever in the sun, the dusty, bluish-white paint peels away from the decaying oak boards of our porch. The muggy air, dead of a breeze, makes my skin itch. The weather’s just another pressure in my life, suffocating me, and the swell of my uterus against my lungs isn’t helping.
Mama tucks a grayish blonde strand of hair into her sunhat. It’s not fancy. Just something she wears to hide her unkempt hair.
“Georgia summer,” she says, all breathless-like. “That’s why I like it here. I like these Georgia summers.”
I don’t like Georgia summers. They smell like animal piss and grass and wet concrete cooking in the sun. But it’s not just the summers. I don’t like anything about Georgia. Georgia is home of the Darkness.
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Rebecca Hamilton writes Paranormal Fantasy, Gothic Horror, and Literary Fiction. She is represented by the ever-more-amazing Rossano Trentin of TZLA.
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